March Fic
Our March Review Fic is The Mad and The Conqueror by G0bSmackt.
Public discussion may span any of the chapters. We want to make this discussion constructive, so any flames or "omgiluvit!" will be deleted. If you love it or hate it, you can say so—just explain why. This is about actual discussion, about the story, the plot, characters, writing, style, technicalities, what makes it great, what could be improved, etc. So, go ahead and begin the discussion!
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Jun. 26, 2o1o
Well I certainly am.
Just give me some time to read and I'll post something in a day.
Busy with school work but I'll at least talk about the first chapter :)
I briefly skimmed and it seems to be full of potential.
A female character who has violent tendencies but is quite smart and athletic.
P.S. I just discovered the site. I'll post a link on my profile if no one minds.
I literally couldn't stop especially the first few chapters, I didn't expect Madison to be affected by him already in their first encounter.
I was a bit disappointed, I thought she was stronger than that, but then decided it was better that way, the chemistry between her and Caine turned explosive.
I thought the story would only rotate between two perspectives but she rotates between quite a few.
Interesting to find that both of her best friends also have their own love interests too.
The author made the characters feel very real to me, and they're conversation seemed plausible enough. Although sometimes I thought it was a tad long, but I guess I just really wanted to read through the whole thing fast.
The characters also have depth, and you kind of understand they're behaviour and why they do what they do in most cases.
Anyway, I think I've babbled enough.
Hopefully I made some sort of contribution :) Really like the site by the way, hopefully the April prompt is put up soon, seeing as the March deadline has already passed.
I have just discovered this website, by the way, through Armith-Greenleaf's profile on Fictonpress.com. I'm very interested in what it's all about!